Anybody interested in writing collaborative haikus? One word per person & sentence, whoever comes first. Let me know.
2 years ago.
5 comments so far
3 people would be enough to (flexibly) start. A haiku is basically a poem made by 5+7+5 sillabes, containing optionally a reference to Nature. Someone would start a jaiku with one word and others would follow. There would be still the Jaiku limit of 140 characters.
5 comments so far
3 people would be enough to (flexibly) start. A haiku is basically a poem made by 5+7+5 sillabes, containing optionally a reference to Nature. Someone would start a jaiku with one word and others would follow. There would be still the Jaiku limit of 140 characters.
For example:
Winter
Winter brings
Winter brings fresh
Winter brings fresh winds
Winter brings fresh winds memories
...etc
2 years ago by qgil
Put me in the list (=5 sillabes' "verse", btw)
I'm not sure I understand what you mean by "& sentence" (in "One word per person & sentence"). I think your example should be reproduced like this:
Winter brings fresh winds (5 sillabes)
memories (3 first sillabes of a 7 sillabes' verse)
Collaborative haikus are difficult because previous contributions to a verse may leave insufficient space for a closing fitting word.
2 years ago by badosa
(accidentally I marked your comment as spam, sorry!)
Good, then we only need a third contributor to start.
Collaboration is always more effective when you think in the others i.e. the next guy writing a word after you. Some practice also helps.
Your example of sentences/verses is much clearer. I failed starting a new line with 'memories'.
2 years ago by qgil
In fact what the hell. Let's start the two of us. I will begin with the (haiku) flag and one word in a new jaiku.
2 years ago by qgil
http://qgil.jaiku.com/presence/21739039 feel free to join
2 years ago by qgil